Holy Ground

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You will never find a greater love.
with the alter so full of hope,
You'll come in and find a place;
You'll find Jesus,
in this holy place.
He speaks to you today,
the words a echo from my lips.
In this holy place you are found,
this holy ground you are safe.
So come beautiful souls of life,
come as you are to the sanctuary;
you'll always know his love,
cause Jesus Christ never fades away.





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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 7:38 am
I think this is beautiful---the image works well also. My favorite lines are the last six.
 
Artemisia said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 10:13 pm
I think this is beautiful. Your poem has a great message of Jesus' amazing love, and I like the way you worded it.  :)
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 7:27 am
Wow, thanks:)
 
Toran replied...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 8:30 pm

Ahhhh!!!!This was beauuutiiifullll!!!! I loved it. That just added a 10% sparkle to my day!!!! :d

 

 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 7:35 am
You seem to be in a great mood! lol..Im glad I could add sparkle to your day Toran!!:) And thanks!!
 
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