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A Heart in Love

What happens to a heart in love?

Does it make you smile
like a visit from an old friend?
Or break when he leaves -
And never mend?
Does it all happen over night?
Or grow and appear slowly -
like a ray of sunlight?

Maybe it beats fast
like a hummingbird's wings.

Or maybe it sings.

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Kinzi said...
Mar. 17, 2012 at 8:15 am:

This was great! Even before I read your description I was like "langston hughes?" I love the last line in particular. 


"Or maybe it sings?"

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loveissmiles said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 10:35 am:

I really like this poem! Keep up the good work, and don't forget to give me some feedback!! :D


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Mar. 15, 2012 at 9:58 am :
thank you! it takes alot of stress off of me to write (:
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