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What Makes A Woman

February 9, 2012
By M2coolTodd PLATINUM, Clarksdale, Mississippi
M2coolTodd PLATINUM, Clarksdale, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
" A day without laughter, is a day wasted."
" Embrace your awesomeness!"


What makes a woman?
Is it her dazzling eyes
the curves in her hips
or the size of her thighs?

Is it her gorgeous smile
or the softness of her lips?
Is she a woman
by the way she thrusts her hips?

What makes a woman?
Is it the smoothness of her hands
the flowing of her hair
or standing by her side is a great man?

Is she a woman
because of the clothes she wears?
or is she a woman
by the pain her heart bears?

What makes a woman?
Is it her loyalty?
the place she lives
or the fact she's treated like royalty?

Is she a woman
because she can do it all on her own?
or is she a woman
because she's always alone?

What makes a woman?
Is it the way she walks
the way she carries herself
or the way she talks?

Is she a woman
because she turns other's heads?
or is she a woman
because she chooses to stay single instead?

She is a woman
because of the way she reveals her mind
acts, walks, talks, depicts herself....
She's a woman by the way she was designed.


The author's comments:
A commercial inspired me to do this and so did reality.

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on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:18 pm
M2coolTodd PLATINUM, Clarksdale, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A day without laughter, is a day wasted."
" Embrace your awesomeness!"

Thankyou lots!!! It never could have been done without you and Ms.P

Teacher said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 7:49 pm
Love this one too!  Excellent writing and outstanding thinking.. you are one to something.