Blinded MAG

March 10, 2008
By Lauren Glowski, Clarkston, MI

The door clanks and shudders to a halt.
A click, a breath – a blinding silence.
Unsure of every step in this massive, empty darkness.
A thin black velvet shroud spread all around us.
Silence. Stillness. Anxious whispers from faceless mouths.
White hot beams of light
Flash before my ready eyes.
A movement quick, bulbs multiply.
We are sequins and rhinestone.
Stars sparkling from heights so high,
not ready to come down.

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randomwriter said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 3:04 pm
this poem is amazing

on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:26 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

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M C=<3 said...
on Mar. 17 2009 at 1:15 am

on Dec. 17 2008 at 11:40 pm
Beautiful <3 I love the last two lines.

Redemption65 said...
on Dec. 14 2008 at 4:18 pm
Where's the ending?

on Dec. 9 2008 at 4:28 pm
I liked it. It was... well it was different.

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