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January 16, 2012
By country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

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You stand there staring at me
Like I did something bad
Like I was a guilty for something but what?
All I could do was stare back
Who is she? What does she want?
I just kept looking and staring and wondering but
She looked sad, heartbroken
What happened to her?
Where’s her smile, her laugh and happy looking joyful face?
Then I just remember I was staring at myself in the mirror.

© Paula B., Katy, TX

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sleeping-beauty_gurl PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2013 at 11:58 pm
sleeping-beauty_gurl PLATINUM, Helena, Montana
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"There are none so blind as those who refuse to see"

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There are no words.....I am seriously about to cry right now. That right there....is the story of my life. I'm going to seriously cry.....
ElisaTheDuck ELITE said...
on Apr. 21 2013 at 8:10 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

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This poem is so beautiful I felt like crying!
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:35 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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concluded it beautifully
Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 3:40 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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The ending is so beautiful...!!!
Opticalillusion DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 29 2012 at 12:25 pm
Opticalillusion DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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short but entertaining great twist at the head  i love it and it goes with the hot topic of depresson that happens to alot of ppl today. so great job once again country just great :D
dbk1098 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:44 pm
dbk1098 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
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LOVE it!!! You have such great talent! Love the surprise ending and the true honesty in your words!
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:14 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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"Can't get no more free randy!"

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Great twist at the end, I think it's a little bit of what we all see in the  mirror! 
caitiekate GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:54 pm
caitiekate GOLD, Hopkinton, New Hampshire
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wow, the ending gave me goosebumps!!! i love this poem a lot...i like it's length for what you had to say and it's just one of those poems that connects with a lot of people...especially depressed teenagers. great job!!!
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:51 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Wow, I didn't see the ending coming, untl I read it of course! :P  Thanks for sharing this, country!!!
@nime.@ngel BRONZE said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:30 pm
@nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
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oh my god! thats really good! keep on writing!
hypermagical said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:39 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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You can quote me on that.

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I love this, Cutie! I think your honesty is what makes the ending such a surprise. Keep writing!
AbigailElizabeth SILVER said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:33 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
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The simplest of works are sometimes the most striking and beautiful, which is the case with this work! Never stop writing:)
SupportIndie SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 4:32 pm
SupportIndie SILVER, Conifer, Colorado
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This is really good :) I didn't expect the ending, I kinda expected it to be sappy and cliche, but it was really cool. 
onedaymore143 SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 1:20 pm
onedaymore143 SILVER, Conifer, Colorado
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i like it it has good word choice and a great twist at the end You ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER