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You stand there staring at me
Like I did something bad
Like I was a guilty for something but what?
All I could do was stare back
Who is she? What does she want?
I just kept looking and staring and wondering but
She looked sad, heartbroken
What happened to her?
Where’s her smile, her laugh and happy looking joyful face?
Then I just remember I was staring at myself in the mirror.



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3MOsleeping-beautyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 17, 2013 at 11:58 pm:
There are no words.....I am seriously about to cry right now. That right there....is the story of my life. I'm going to seriously cry.....
 
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Elisa39This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 8:10 pm:
This poem is so beautiful I felt like crying!
 
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Hamzawaseem said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 12:35 pm:
concluded it beautifully
 
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Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 3:40 pm:
The ending is so beautiful...!!!
 
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dbk1098 said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 8:44 pm:
LOVE it!!! You have such great talent! Love the surprise ending and the true honesty in your words!
 
TheUnwantedTruthThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 12:25 pm :
short but entertaining great twist at the head  i love it and it goes with the hot topic of depresson that happens to alot of ppl today. so great job once again country just great :D
 
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DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 11:14 am:
Great twist at the end, I think it's a little bit of what we all see in the  mirror! 
 
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caitiekate said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 1:54 pm:
wow, the ending gave me goosebumps!!! i love this poem a lot...i like it's length for what you had to say and it's just one of those poems that connects with a lot of people...especially depressed teenagers. great job!!!
 
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@nime.@ngel said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 1:30 pm:
oh my god! thats really good! keep on writing!
 
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hypermagicalThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 9:39 am:
I love this, Cutie! I think your honesty is what makes the ending such a surprise. Keep writing!
 
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AbigailElizabeth said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:33 pm:
The simplest of works are sometimes the most striking and beautiful, which is the case with this work! Never stop writing:)
 
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SupportIndie said...
Feb. 27, 2012 at 4:32 pm:
This is really good :) I didn't expect the ending, I kinda expected it to be sappy and cliche, but it was really cool. 
 
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wintersnow1698 said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 1:20 pm:
i like it it has good word choice and a great twist at the end You ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER
 
Proud_To_Be_An_AmericanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 1:51 pm :
Wow, I didn't see the ending coming, untl I read it of course! :P  Thanks for sharing this, country!!!
 
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