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Confused

January 16, 2012
By country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it


You stand there staring at me
Like I did something bad
Like I was a guilty for something but what?
All I could do was stare back
Who is she? What does she want?
I just kept looking and staring and wondering but
She looked sad, heartbroken
What happened to her?
Where’s her smile, her laugh and happy looking joyful face?
Then I just remember I was staring at myself in the mirror.



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on May. 17 2013 at 11:58 pm
sleeping-beauty_gurl PLATINUM, Helena, Montana
25 articles 2 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are none so blind as those who refuse to see"

There are no words.....I am seriously about to cry right now. That right there....is the story of my life. I'm going to seriously cry.....

on Apr. 21 2013 at 8:10 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments
This poem is so beautiful I felt like crying!

on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:35 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

concluded it beautifully

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 3:40 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

The ending is so beautiful...!!!

on Dec. 29 2012 at 12:25 pm
Opticalillusion DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
64 articles 13 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am an artist bound only for the poet's glory....But only achieve half of the success that my dreams aspire to find, And to what do the whispers tell me of this failure...To what end to they haunt my nightmares...my eternal dark dreams...

short but entertaining great twist at the head  i love it and it goes with the hot topic of depresson that happens to alot of ppl today. so great job once again country just great :D

on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:44 pm
dbk1098 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
20 articles 0 photos 41 comments
LOVE it!!! You have such great talent! Love the surprise ending and the true honesty in your words!

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:14 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Great twist at the end, I think it's a little bit of what we all see in the  mirror! 

on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:54 pm
caitiekate GOLD, Hopkinton, New Hampshire
16 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want, not what you can." --Me

wow, the ending gave me goosebumps!!! i love this poem a lot...i like it's length for what you had to say and it's just one of those poems that connects with a lot of people...especially depressed teenagers. great job!!!

Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:51 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

Wow, I didn't see the ending coming, untl I read it of course! :P  Thanks for sharing this, country!!!

on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:30 pm
@nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 34 comments
oh my god! thats really good! keep on writing!

hypermagical said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:39 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

I love this, Cutie! I think your honesty is what makes the ending such a surprise. Keep writing!

on Mar. 2 2012 at 5:33 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

The simplest of works are sometimes the most striking and beautiful, which is the case with this work! Never stop writing:)

on Feb. 27 2012 at 4:32 pm
SupportIndie SILVER, Conifer, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I contend that we are both atheists. I just believe in one fewer god than you do. When you understand why you dismiss all the other possible gods, you will understand why I dismiss yours" --Richard Dawkins

This is really good :) I didn't expect the ending, I kinda expected it to be sappy and cliche, but it was really cool. 

on Feb. 20 2012 at 1:20 pm
onedaymore143 SILVER, Conifer, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
I wanna be the girl he gives his hoddies to, and cuddels up to when its cold, He'll be the one who comes up behind me and wraps his arms around his waist, catchs off gaurd and says you are beautiful.

i like it it has good word choice and a great twist at the end You ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER


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