February 4, 2012
  You came into my world

  And I fell for your feminine charm 

I got sucked into your words

Your promises

Your lies

Even when I cried over you

In heartbreak and sorrow

I still ran back

For more disappointment

 I fell in too deep

And couldn't be bought back up to the surface

I was drowning in your false words

I saw you as beauty

One of kind, the greatest thing in the world

But all they saw was a demon

Who took my heart and destroyed it

 It took my forever to realize the truth

And when I did

It hurt like hell

I can't breath or even think

Anger took control of me


My heart still yawned and cried out for you

I'll never understand why I allowed you to treat me that way

But I guess I was blinded by love

Blinded from the truth

And blinded by your so called "love"

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MercyChristine said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 11:32 am
This is good.  My only suggestion is that you don't use the word 'yawned' maybe 'yearned'?  Yawned makes it seem like you were tired of her and didn't care.
HiddenAngelInTheDark replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 12:46 pm
Thanks and I will :) glad you like it
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