February 3, 2012
By Keira BRONZE, Oxnard, California
Keira BRONZE, Oxnard, California
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That place you want so bad
Yet can't quite reach
The place that you need
But never get
The place of love
And timeless love
Forever love
Endless love
That place
Where no one could love you more

It's right there
on that mountain
Your almost there
Then you fall at the last step
So you climb the mountain again
Could you reach the top?
You try and try
Do you succeed

So, what's the point of trying?
Getting your hopes up
Only to have them fall
You go through it
The cold
The bitterness and sorrow
Only to have your dreams crushed
You were so close
Almost to the top
But you fell and couldn't get back up

You think what's the point?
I gave it a shot
It won't let me in
It hates me
Never wanted me
So i gave up
No more pain
I Want that love
Will I get it?
Should I try again?

All the things I go through
Try to remember
Go to the place of love
When it first was

That place I want forever
The kiss of the sun
The song of wind
The dance of the flowers
That place I once called home

The author's comments:
well my step-mom and father are getting divored and just hearing that made me want to cry. This is my fathers forth girlfriend/wife. I was scared for my little sisters and I just want to be done with it all. I just wrote and wrote till i felt better.

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