Love?

February 8, 2012
By Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous


Love...


sucha unexplainable word,


sucha sneeky trap,


sucha unreliable feeling.
 
You don't know how to explain it so you get sucked into finding the meaning.
 
You let it take your world, you rotate around, it becoming your center.
 
trust, courage, bravery, happiness, honesty, etc,
they can get ruined easily by the poison in a veil called heart break.
 
It kills you slowly.
 
Cracking the walls of your heart,
stabbing your gut,
bringing your life down.
 
Convincing you, in the end, you're a fool & will never find anything.

The author's comments:
Written: 03/28/11
This poem describes love in a negative way, which I think about when it comes to heart break. Though it is the best feeling in the world, so hard to explain, it can be a sneaky trap you get sucked into.

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on Mar. 25 2012 at 6:22 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

you're very welcome (:

on Mar. 25 2012 at 5:43 pm
WithShatteredWings SILVER, Choteau, Montana
7 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are everything I want cause you are everything I'm not-Taking back sunday

Everything you do in life is insignificant but it is very important that you do-Gandhi

Happiness is an inside job- papa

It's how I exactly feel... I'm going through what your saying and your poetry makes me feel better about it. Thank you.

on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:31 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

Thank you (:

on Feb. 18 2012 at 9:41 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

pretty!!! I think it is very nice it flowed nicely


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