Just Friends

January 22, 2012
By vetlover21 SILVER, Bronx, New York
vetlover21 SILVER, Bronx, New York
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"changeing for pople doesn\\\'t make you friends for life, staying yourslef does."


We are always together
Friends forever
After school we hang
Laughter never stops

Today we had a snow ball fight
Went in the stores to stay warm
I hugged you when we got out side
The boys across the street laughed

We’ve been best friend for a year
People ask if we're dating
And we stop speaking
The answer was always no

You call me belle and I you nevets
We would never date each other
And say it every time someone mentions it

You buy me lunch
I buy the snack
We hug every day
And hug to say goodbye

Who knows we might make a good couple
But that's not what we want
We are best friend and that's it

So ask us if we are dating
We’ll just stop speaking
You and I are friends
And that is it, just friends



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on Apr. 11 2012 at 4:36 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

There are some spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes here and there, and the wording is sort of jumbled, if you get what I mean. It makes the poem confusing. I like how you wrote it--making it sound like the person is saying something, but thinking another.

on Apr. 1 2012 at 8:55 pm
orangechick18 SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
5 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not like a box of chocolates.It's more like a jar of jalapenos, what you do today,might burn your ass tomorrow!

This poem is good, but some of the wording doesnt make sence to me, and that causes me to not be able to feel the true emotion.




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