Much Better

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
I walk a path alone

Singing our song

The path I walk is dark

The song I sing is sad

Left alone to cry

Until they come

They walk beside me

Singing happy songs

Brighten my day

Wiping my tears away

They help

Well you cry

After you realize I mean something to you





Join the Discussion

This article has 4 comments. Post your own now!

mr.poe.thesethoughts This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 11:36 am
i really like this one
 
Blue4indigo said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:48 am
It flows beautifully, and I really like the short, but expressive lines you use!
 
Wonderment said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:24 am
It's sweet and nice and I like it.
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 6:02 pm
One word: beautiful :)
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback