Waiting for you

February 5, 2012
I wait for you,
and ache for you.
Do you notice my slowly breaking heart?

Every smile on my face
is fake
unless I'm thinking
of you,
or seeing you,
or talking to you.

I hurt everyday
just waiting for you
to notice me as more
than just a friend.

I wait for you,
and ache for you,
but waiting can only last so long.

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JessicaRae7 said...
May 11, 2012 at 7:21 am
thank you so much!!
poetidea_myworld_22 said...
May 11, 2012 at 7:12 am
I can totally relate to this! so good love it :)
RhinoSaurusRexPlease said...
Feb. 25, 2012 at 2:41 am
Actually, I can totally relate to this poem. It's fantastic... Keep up the good work, and I'm ultra positive you'll find the strength you need to move on. Time strengthens everyone.
Lice said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 10:19 pm
Hm... I really like this. The simplicity, the feeling of desperation; it's short and to the point, which is the poetic style I love. I feel as though, you probably could've used more simile and more complex words to describe your emotions, but that's not major. Good job with this.
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