February 3, 2012
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A Brilliance that none can explain,
A Color no one can describe,
The Base of life no one can live without,
The Core of goodwill,

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Ashleyy1213 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 6:09 pm
its pretty good
Rena_Rox said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 4:10 pm
This has very good rhythm to it, the flow is very beautiful. The meaning behind it is very obvious which does not give the reader much to dwell upon. As is, it is very well written. Keep up the good work!
WrittenEmotions said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 4:02 pm
I'm not exactly a fan of short poems. Bit this was strangely beautiful!(: 5/5
Shmelmo said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 2:55 pm
I liked the first part the best but I would have wrote the last two lines differently. Nice Job though!
roguemilk replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 2:58 pm
Thanks, I will write more... Feel free to read
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 4:01 pm
Wow this is good! it flows nicely and speaks the truth! good job!
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