Happiness

February 3, 2012
By roguemilk BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
roguemilk BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are remembered by the rules you break, but not the rules you follow


A Brilliance that none can explain,
A Color no one can describe,
The Base of life no one can live without,
The Core of goodwill,
Happiness


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on Feb. 5 2012 at 6:09 pm
Ashleyy1213 GOLD, CHICAGO, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Life is the art of drawling, without an eraser.

its pretty good

on Feb. 5 2012 at 4:10 pm
Neonlimabean GOLD, Wyoming, Michigan
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This has very good rhythm to it, the flow is very beautiful. The meaning behind it is very obvious which does not give the reader much to dwell upon. As is, it is very well written. Keep up the good work!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 4:02 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

I'm not exactly a fan of short poems. Bit this was strangely beautiful!(: 5/5

on Feb. 5 2012 at 4:01 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Wow this is good! it flows nicely and speaks the truth! good job!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:58 pm
roguemilk BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are remembered by the rules you break, but not the rules you follow

Thanks, I will write more... Feel free to read

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:55 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

I liked the first part the best but I would have wrote the last two lines differently. Nice Job though!


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