Music

Music, it plays
For hours
For days!
With the hip hop
And classic
And even some rock.

It plays ad it plays
For hours
For days!
Moving on
And on
and on.

But when the music stops
And the bass no longer drops
what will we hear?
What will we fear?
When the music

just

Stops…





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hypermagical said...
Apr. 2, 2012 at 3:49 pm
This is awesome, Angel!!! I love it, I'm gonna show it to my BFF, and I know she'll love it too!!!
 
B-Artistic said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 9:05 am

All the above comments you got here .... are true.. in  a way....

i got nothing to say.... dont mind me!!

and ya i hope Music keeps on playing, and inspires us all along....

Cheers , for the great songs to come....

 
Angelgir39 replied...
Feb. 26, 2012 at 6:59 pm
Cheers! Thank u for the comment B, u r always so supportive to my writing! I could never mind u, just don't mind me!
 
Shortty1314 said...
Feb. 18, 2012 at 9:44 pm
I really enjoyed the rhythm of your poem (: I loved reading it !
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 26, 2012 at 6:55 pm
Thank you so much! ;)
 
luzbeyda_perez05 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:47 am
This poem is well thought out and organized. Good job and great piece (:
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:58 am
Thank you so much
 
otherpoet said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 10:52 pm
This is an awesome poem! Love the rhyme and the way the poem kind of softly trickles out, like someone slowly turning down the volume on a radio. Great job!
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 11:01 pm
Aw shucks, your too kind. Thank you
 
thefamoustapper said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 7:02 pm
I sure hope it never stops! nice concept, 5/5!
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 7:14 pm
Thank you.
 
AMJaeh said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 10:45 am
i hope and pray music never stops because without id die lol music keeps me going in life and without it the world will here silence
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 6:46 pm
Haha, I am exactly the same way. I am glad you commented!
 
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