Drops of You

January 30, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


Everyday I sit here re-living the torture.
The pain you've caused inside me.
The scars will always be there,
but you will never care.
I look at the storm outside,
that's nothing compared to me inside;
what you've done has made me bleed deep,
these wounds will never heal.

Every drop of blood that falls,
it's only drops of you;
and I will never forget the day.
You changed my life forever.

That day I died to everything,
everything went black and white.
Its a new void that never goes away,
and now all that can save me; is mercy.


The author's comments:
"This is about one of my ex- boyfriend's and part my dad too. And even though I got saved and got away from them I will never forget the pain and torture they have put me through, what they done is something that will change my life forever!"

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on Apr. 11 2012 at 8:23 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

LilZo11, no not yet but I am working on that I got to save up some money first;) Thanks alot!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 2:57 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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hey, the title sounds really familiar, was it published in the magazine? and if not, it should be, its really good, but really sad.

on Feb. 10 2012 at 7:40 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow thanks! And its ok, or Im ok now..Sorry you and your mom didnt get along..I just dont understand whats wrong with people/parents these days..And when you move out they try and say they are sorry. I fell for that and moved back in with my dad and he done me the same way..So I moved out for good then...

on Feb. 9 2012 at 11:16 am
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

now this is my favorite from you. The imagery that went into this is wonderful. I'm sorry that you've had to go through such abuse to be able to write this but I know how that goes as well. Me and my mother didnt exactly get along when I was growing up.

on Feb. 8 2012 at 7:23 am
glindawitchofthenorth BRONZE, Bloomville, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Today is the tomorrow you worried about yesterday.”

This is so deep and I can really tell its from the heart. I sorry you had to go through that. Way to stay strong:)

on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:51 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

The part that my dad has in this is he is abusive to me. I finally got away from him though, but what he done will always be in my head--will always be with me...




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