A hidden Blessing

January 29, 2012
By J.Fox BRONZE, Palestine, Texas
J.Fox BRONZE, Palestine, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you dont want to dies then you shouldnt have been born.


Life is but an open road with many paths.
No matter what path you take it will always end the same .... death.
Death is a beautiful thing it allows you to be free of a world of evil.
A world full of death, and decay.
A world where one child dies, and an inoccent person is murdered.
The people left behind must grieve but they must also rejoice.
For that person has left this cruel and evil world.
So be thankful for death for it is our one true gift.


The author's comments:
I don't usally do poetry so please honest coments

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on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:12 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

You're welcome keep up the good work

J.Fox BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:10 pm
J.Fox BRONZE, Palestine, Texas
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you dont want to dies then you shouldnt have been born.

Thank you for your comment

on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:09 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

I like it alot and you're right we do end up in death or murder and well that's life for us sadly

J.Fox BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 6:52 pm
J.Fox BRONZE, Palestine, Texas
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you dont want to dies then you shouldnt have been born.

Thank you for your comment.

on Feb. 5 2012 at 6:50 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

I really liked it and thought it was good for a not normal poet. I thought that it had a nice message and I really like it! Keep writing poetry, you're good!


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