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Anger, frustration, no release.
Run down to the bones,
Fighting for a sign of hope;
When suddenly a glimmer of light provides me forsight.
My future could be bright.
... But this cloud emits giant shadows over my vision;
Blinding me from the beam of salvation.
Wishing only to be in its arms!
But instead I am pulled further into damnation.



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otherpoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 12:03 am:
this is a very good poem. I like how it's so mysterious, and can relate to just about anything! I love your transition from the darkness to the what-could-be, it is very subtle. Great job!
 
bassoonkid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 11:42 am :
Thank you for your comment! I really love to hear what other people think! I'll have to check out some of yours for sure
 
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