Further and Further

January 29, 2012
By bassoonkid PLATINUM, Bountiful, Utah
bassoonkid PLATINUM, Bountiful, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe in yourself... The major work of the world is done by ordinary people who have learned to work in the extraordinary ways" Gordon B. Hinckley


Anger, frustration, no release.
Run down to the bones,
Fighting for a sign of hope;
When suddenly a glimmer of light provides me forsight.
My future could be bright.
... But this cloud emits giant shadows over my vision;
Blinding me from the beam of salvation.
Wishing only to be in its arms!
But instead I am pulled further into damnation.


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one mistake is all it takes to start the hole.

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on Feb. 11 2012 at 11:42 am
bassoonkid PLATINUM, Bountiful, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe in yourself... The major work of the world is done by ordinary people who have learned to work in the extraordinary ways" Gordon B. Hinckley

Thank you for your comment! I really love to hear what other people think! I'll have to check out some of yours for sure

on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:03 am
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

this is a very good poem. I like how it's so mysterious, and can relate to just about anything! I love your transition from the darkness to the what-could-be, it is very subtle. Great job!


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