The Torture

January 24, 2012
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I just can't take this stuff.I'm going to blow you away.I'm going to be a monster on these streets,so stay away.Yes I am a crazy monster.Red is what I see.When i get into my beast zone,You aren't who i would want to be.Mess with me and I will put you out of sight.If you really think that's a threat then keep messing with me and I just might!

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SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 8:12 am
I love this! And it rhymes really good. Great Job!:)
Frenchie15 replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 1:41 pm
thank you.i wrote this one day when i was really angry.i actually think it is one of my best though
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 8:31 am
You know I will agree with you Frenchie15 it does look like its one of your best pieces:) And your welcome. All of your other writings are really good too though..I get to thinkin it seems like when someone is angry; even me; people tend to write better..its a little weird to me..
Frenchie15 replied...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 2:53 pm
i feel the same way.i get my best pieces when i am either hurt,sad,or angry
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