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Lugging broken hearts,
So overwhelming,
These tough times,
Struggling to be perfect,
A perfect son,
A perfect brother,
A perfect nephew,

A tightly shut heart,
A tightly shut mind,
Thoughts,
Coming from where?
Stuck,
Depressed,
Under overwhelming pressure,
All gone.

Broken hearts
Left
Sure to be caught


In



The




Wind.



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celebeauty said...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 8:21 am:

geart job! i love it

 

 
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illusions said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 3:06 pm:
this is beautiful! i really like this! plz check out mine and comment plz
 
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AngelsKiss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:57 am:
very good poem clipped, but expressive and to the point 5/5 please read and comment on some of my poems
 
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White_Trash843 said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 4:25 am:
great job many can relate also>!
 
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ashleyX13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 9:35 am:
beautiful! i really liked the ending! strong work, keep it up
 
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otherpoet said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 9:33 pm:
This is impressive poetry. You should be proud of yourself, and so should your cousin. He's in a better place now. This is a great poem, full of thoughtfulness and feeling. Great work!
 
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Supernova7 said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 12:07 pm:
This is a really good poem. It was very emotional and it was well structured. Could you please check out some of my work? Thanx
 
Supernova7 replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 12:08 pm :
sorry I posted it twice
 
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Supernova7 said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 12:06 pm:
This is a really good poem. It was very emotional and it was well structured. Could you please check out some of my work?
 
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loveyourselfforwhoyouare said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 9:35 pm:
This is a really good poem. I love it. You should write more you're really good at it.
 
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TheQueenOfLiberty said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 5:35 pm:
wow i felt the hairs on my arms raise up
 
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BlurredReflection said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 3:00 pm:
I really like this. I like your word choice and im sure many can relate to this. I can. I went through some tough times. but honestly, this piece is very honest and the feelings really come through.
 
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Veronaa. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 11:03 am:
This is truly amazing and heartfelt. I can relate to this. I have a cousin who attempted suicide while on substance abuse. I'm really sorry for your cousin. It's the ones who stay alive that feel the pain.
 
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