My day

January 28, 2012
By PAZS12 PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
PAZS12 PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Be you, Be true!


I have my heels on,
My stylish yet appropriate dress top,
Hair is done,
Make up is fantastic, simple and elegant,
Nails are up to par,
I am… ready to go!
My day is done now-home to relax.
My feet hurt.
My toes are sore.
My calves’ burn.
I want to sit down.
Walked up and down stairs so much I stopped counting after the first hundred-was good the first time, now,
I want to sit down!
I come through the door and you want me to do what?
Please repeat that, do what now?
I been on my feet all day, come home to still do more.
Plus two upstairs who need attention and you want me to do WHAT?!
Do you know how my day was?- of course not, you didn’t BLOODY ask!
YOU KNOW WHAT I DO AND COME HOME TO DO?
NO! NO YOU DON’T SO DON’T SIT THERE AND ASK FOR ANYTHING!
I can’t believe you asked! Igit!
Come home and do…ridiculous, think I’m superwoman and can do all this at once and then some.
HELL NO!
Only got one life and two legs.
You want it, you do it!
I’m tired, I’m taking a break.
I could use a backrub however.
Thanks dear.


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on Feb. 2 2012 at 9:40 am
ashleyX13 PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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"I've made mistakes; not one regret." Alyssa Nicolson

i didnt like it much, but it wasnt bad. it was very simplistic but not in a totallybad way. overall a solid 3 stars. Whats igit?

on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:05 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

haha this was kinda funny the last few lines were at least I like the irony of it all, though it wasn't in any real rhythem it did tell a story, I with the wording and the way you said it I could feel the excitement turn into irritation, like it:) please read some of my poems:)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 11:29 am
thecherrykas BRONZE, Windham, New Hampshire
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I see you so please stay strong

wow that was really great. very vivid


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