Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

My day

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
I have my heels on,
My stylish yet appropriate dress top,
Hair is done,
Make up is fantastic, simple and elegant,
Nails are up to par,
I am… ready to go!
My day is done now-home to relax.
My feet hurt.
My toes are sore.
My calves’ burn.
I want to sit down.
Walked up and down stairs so much I stopped counting after the first hundred-was good the first time, now,
I want to sit down!
I come through the door and you want me to do what?
Please repeat that, do what now?
I been on my feet all day, come home to still do more.
Plus two upstairs who need attention and you want me to do WHAT?!
Do you know how my day was?- of course not, you didn’t BLOODY ask!
YOU KNOW WHAT I DO AND COME HOME TO DO?
NO! NO YOU DON’T SO DON’T SIT THERE AND ASK FOR ANYTHING!
I can’t believe you asked! Igit!
Come home and do…ridiculous, think I’m superwoman and can do all this at once and then some.
HELL NO!
Only got one life and two legs.
You want it, you do it!
I’m tired, I’m taking a break.
I could use a backrub however.
Thanks dear.





Join the Discussion

This article has 3 comments. Post your own now!

ashleyX13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 9:40 am
i didnt like it much, but it wasnt bad. it was very simplistic but not in a totallybad way. overall a solid 3 stars. Whats igit?
 
AngelsKiss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:05 am
haha this was kinda funny the last few lines were at least I like the irony of it all, though it wasn't in any real rhythem it did tell a story, I with the wording and the way you said it I could feel the excitement turn into irritation, like it:) please read some of my poems:)
 
thecherrykas said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 11:29 am
wow that was really great. very vivid
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback