Live and Die

January 28, 2012
By HopefullyTrue BRONZE, East New Market, Maryland
HopefullyTrue BRONZE, East New Market, Maryland
1 article 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"one day your life will pass through your eyes. make it worth waching"- unknown


She can't find her way,
to live in the day
she created for everything to be o.k.

She has a great space,
she can't seam to replace.

The love, the laugh, the lie
she seams to live and die.

The smile written on her face,
can never seam to erase

the pain that fills her day
and never seams to go away.

The weakness in her eyes.
shows through even the best of her disguise

and a truth can can be told
on why the lies are never sold.

the love, the laugh, the lie
she seams to live and die.



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on Feb. 4 2012 at 4:56 pm
HopefullyTrue BRONZE, East New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"one day your life will pass through your eyes. make it worth waching"- unknown

Thanks so much for the comment and i did mean seem i am a horrible speller.

on Feb. 2 2012 at 5:55 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

(i'm going to save the best for last) first, the word "seam" was a little overused, and i think you meant "seem" instead of "seam" (?). Second, (now here's the 'best'), my favorite stanzas were the last three :) i really liked those...i can totally relate. You did a great job, 5/5! =)


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