Live and Die

January 28, 2012
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She can't find her way,
to live in the day
she created for everything to be o.k.

She has a great space,
she can't seam to replace.

The love, the laugh, the lie
she seams to live and die.

The smile written on her face,
can never seam to erase

the pain that fills her day
and never seams to go away.

The weakness in her eyes.
shows through even the best of her disguise

and a truth can can be told
on why the lies are never sold.

the love, the laugh, the lie
she seams to live and die.





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JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 5:55 pm
(i'm going to save the best for last) first, the word "seam" was a little overused, and i think you meant "seem" instead of "seam" (?). Second, (now here's the 'best'), my favorite stanzas were the last three :) i really liked those...i can totally relate. You did a great job, 5/5! =)
 
HopefullyTrue replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 4:56 pm
Thanks so much for the comment and i did mean seem i am a horrible speller.
 
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