Very Scary

January 19, 2012
By BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work


This one guy told me that he was, going to kill him self if he got called gay again that's very scary
One of the only friends I have is going to leave school cause I'm her only friend that's very scary
I know this guy that spends four-hundred dollars on drugs every week that very scary
I work so much and beat myself up with these math problems to the point I speak of word problem in my sleep that's very scary
This one girl I know told me we were going to get married (Oh my) that's very very scary
Teachers aren't wasting there time with hopeless students that's very scary


The author's comments:
This is something I created that wasn't to graphic but wasn't to light just something to think about when you close your eyes at night and think about what's around you.

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on Sep. 14 2012 at 1:05 pm
Its.beautiful. BRONZE, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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"Immature love says: 'I love you because I need you.' Mature love says 'I need you because I love you." — Erich Fromm

Couldn't make it past the first line in the first stanza. Congrats!!! You've failed again!

on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:15 pm
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work

Haha, that be nice... 

-Thank you


M_IML DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 12:46 am
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
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Sure, I will - was pllanning on it. Except for that, if you want help with the proofreading submit your stuff to the writers' forum first - I get an email when you do something on the site (ooh, stlalker..!) so I'll know. I can comment and correct it if you'd like...I'd love to, personally/

on Mar. 25 2012 at 7:22 pm
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work

Thank you,  I just type this up when I got the account. Yeah, I do need to proofread a little more. I think if you read my more recent stuff you'd be pleased. 

M_IML DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 3:03 am
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
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Loved this! Again (I just commented on "Do as you speak"), this is totally unique and original. Same problem though, the polishing: here that means grammar (their\there), proofreading and just basically polishing. Just a tip! Except (and despite) that, though, loved this and am favoriting it.

DOODOO said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 7:04 am
This is great!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 6:21 pm
Ohhhhh my lord!!!!!! Your writing is soooo freaking good :) haha btw its Alicia :))))) Anyways... yeah i had no idea you were that good of a writer! im gonna put 5 stars on all of your work :] goood job.. keep it up:))

on Feb. 8 2012 at 5:45 pm
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work

Well thank you very much!

vail09 SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 1:16 pm
vail09 SILVER, Austell, Georgia
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*love is not lost just simpily forgotten*

no reason you shouldnt. i love it!!! i really do from what i can see no one expresses personal yet descreet thoughts like you..

on Feb. 8 2012 at 12:20 pm
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work

Thank you, I really do not like this piece....

on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:23 pm
JoyFulClown BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
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Love the way you live,but live the way you love.

This is Very good for a first piece, But you cut it off a lot with just ending every sentence with "that's very scary" I say it is good just try to put more into it(: Keep up the good work.

on Jan. 30 2012 at 5:34 pm
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dedication, Hard Work

Thanks read some of my other things

on Jan. 30 2012 at 11:13 am
Awesome writing...keep it up!


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