Let me fall

January 19, 2012
By Tanis,the,apple SILVER, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
Tanis,the,apple SILVER, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at anytime."
-Mark Twain

I am falling into the blackness inside why can't you catch me before I fall and I can't bear to face the dark without you so take hold and save my soul please I beg you don't let go and drop me into the abyss below but I slip and fall and I see that it was all my fault and the pain inside amplifies by a thousand fold now I cry out to you yelling I am sorry but you take no heed and as I am sinking I hear you laughing at me so far above and yet so close to my heart I cry and the tears stop and I fall ever more into the abyssal black of my deep dark soul so I ask once again please dont let go and let me fall into my soul why do I try you won't catch me so just let go and let me fall so I can end it all and forget the pain that started this all

The author's comments:
I think that I wrote this because of my past I sometimes wish I could fall and forget it all

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This article has 3 comments.

Reese18 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2014 at 9:58 pm
Reese18 SILVER, Redford, Michigan
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that's totally awesome

Omg!! That like sucked me into the world.of you actually going through that.. It touched me. Amazing!!

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:22 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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this is really good and even though it's freeverse it still has a rhythm to is also!

on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:35 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Wow. This Is AMAZING . . It reminds me of my life too.

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