Let me fall

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
I am falling into the blackness inside why can't you catch me before I fall and I can't bear to face the dark without you so take hold and save my soul please I beg you don't let go and drop me into the abyss below but I slip and fall and I see that it was all my fault and the pain inside amplifies by a thousand fold now I cry out to you yelling I am sorry but you take no heed and as I am sinking I hear you laughing at me so far above and yet so close to my heart I cry and the tears stop and I fall ever more into the abyssal black of my deep dark soul so I ask once again please dont let go and let me fall into my soul why do I try you won't catch me so just let go and let me fall so I can end it all and forget the pain that started this all





Join the Discussion

This article has 3 comments. Post your own now!

Ali101 said...
Oct. 8, 2014 at 9:58 pm
Omg!! That like sucked me into the world.of you actually going through that.. It touched me. Amazing!!
 
White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 7:22 pm
this is really good and even though it's freeverse it still has a rhythm to is also!
 
Ruthie_j said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 8:35 pm
Wow. This Is AMAZING . . It reminds me of my life too.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback