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Day to Day.

People waking
People stalking
People mocking
People talking

Moving here
Moving there
Travel the streets
Everywhere

The rhythm of love
The feeling of sound
Don't you know
You make my heart pound




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SaltwaterRoom said...
Jul. 31, 2012 at 2:27 pm:
Yes I will! And thank you for the feedback! (:
 
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InkWriter13 said...
Jul. 18, 2012 at 7:51 pm:
Sweet poem. Simple, yet concise in a nice way. It speaks of its own, and it isn't cluttered with too many words. Nice choices, nice writing, nice idea, nice ending. 5 stars. :) If you want to make it Really Great, you could flesh it out a little with details, advanced vocabulary, and shocking clarity of thought. That's what makes a piece Spectacular!! :) Would you please check out some of my work and post comments? Like In the Music or Perfect Fit or Without the Writer...?
 
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