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Day to Day.

January 19, 2012
By SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."


People waking
People stalking
People mocking
People talking

Moving here
Moving there
Travel the streets
Everywhere

The rhythm of love
The feeling of sound
Don't you know
You make my heart pound



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on Jul. 31 2012 at 2:27 pm
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
38 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."

Yes I will! And thank you for the feedback! (:

InkWriter13 said...
on Jul. 18 2012 at 7:51 pm
Sweet poem. Simple, yet concise in a nice way. It speaks of its own, and it isn't cluttered with too many words. Nice choices, nice writing, nice idea, nice ending. 5 stars. :) If you want to make it Really Great, you could flesh it out a little with details, advanced vocabulary, and shocking clarity of thought. That's what makes a piece Spectacular!! :) Would you please check out some of my work and post comments? Like In the Music or Perfect Fit or Without the Writer...?