Darkness Vs. Light

January 19, 2012
By MontanaPoet21 GOLD, Shepherd, Montana
MontanaPoet21 GOLD, Shepherd, Montana
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Your voice I miss
I crave your kiss
Your touch I sense
Our bodies so tense
The darkness of night engulfs our love
The flapping wings of a lost dove
Sound so near yet far away
There must be more we need to say
Don't go don't leave me here
Help me to face my worst fear
Promise me always you'll love me dear
For the light of day is not so near

The author's comments:
This poem is not easily understood. The guy has to leave yet the girl doesn't want him to. she holds onto him not wanting to let him go until he promises he'll be back and he will always love her because without him all she will see is the darkness

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Carnage said...
on Oct. 12 2012 at 8:01 am
Carnage, Sandy, Utah
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This poem is beautiful, I love the writing style. I also enjoy how abstract the idea is which makes it so many people from many different situations can enjoy and relate.

on Oct. 11 2012 at 10:53 pm
MontanaPoet21 GOLD, Shepherd, Montana
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Thank you :) and my inspiration was my self when my ex had to go away for a long time and I knew that once he left life would never be the same again

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 10:07 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

This is amazing. Ilove it! What was the inspiration behind it?

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