Dragging Me In MAG

January 24, 2012
By Rachel Henline BRONZE, Irmo, South Dakota
Rachel Henline BRONZE, Irmo, South Dakota
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Sapphire eyes
With little flecks of green
Bursting with light
Caught in the undertow of your stare.

Long black lashes
Contrast with the deep blue
Reach out and grab me
Dragging me in.

Drawing my eyes to yours
Our eyes so close
Almost touching
Our lashes knit together

Making us
Part of each other.
Binding a couple into
One.



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on Jan. 24 2012 at 2:06 pm
Addae Williams BRONZE, Irvington, New Jersey
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I love this poem so much. The detail of it draws me in so much it feels like I'm actually inside of the poem. It shows what everybody wants or what to obtain in the future.

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:52 pm
TuneeThaGod BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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Great poem!

Alb1125 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:48 pm
Alb1125 BRONZE, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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the poem gives you a sense of what the poet is yearning for and in this poem he(I presume) is in love with a girl and loves the way she looks. the poem is very descreptive of the subject and paints a picture for you. love this poem and its honesty and courage.

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:46 pm
nanaconda7 BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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#swagswag.

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:42 pm
BenDover90 BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
The best of us can find happiness in misery.

I really liked your poem. It really made me see what you were invisioning. good work and keep it buddy

on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:50 am
AjTaylor BRONZE, Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"TO GOOD FOR HEAVEN, TO BAD FOR HELL"

*on bottomv

on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:49 am
AjTaylor BRONZE, Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"TO GOOD FOR HEAVEN, TO BAD FOR HELL"

I also agree with the guy on top great work!! u did gud hope u submit more

Pappito BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:43 am
Pappito BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Soccer Is life.

I agree with the guy on top ^ Great work

on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:34 am
jayseven BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Y.O.L.O. - Drake"

I like your poem. In my POV, I think your poem has to do with love. It's telling me that you're in love with someone and their presence drags you into them. Or makes you fall deeper in love with them.


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