Dragging Me In This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 24, 2012
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Sapphire eyes
With little flecks of green
Bursting with light
Caught in the undertow of your stare.

Long black lashes
Contrast with the deep blue
Reach out and grab me
Dragging me in.

Drawing my eyes to yours
Our eyes so close
Almost touching
Our lashes knit together

Making us
Part of each other.
Binding a couple into
One.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Addae W. said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 2:06 pm
I love this poem so much. The detail of it draws me in so much it feels like I'm actually inside of the poem. It shows what everybody wants or what to obtain in the future.
 
TuneeThaGod said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:52 pm
Great poem!
 
Alb1125 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:48 pm
the poem gives you a sense of what the poet is yearning for and in this poem he(I presume) is in love with a girl and loves the way she looks. the poem is very descreptive of the subject and paints a picture for you. love this poem and its honesty and courage.
 
nanaconda7 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:46 pm
#swagswag.
 
BenDover90 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:42 pm
I really liked your poem. It really made me see what you were invisioning. good work and keep it buddy
 
AjTaylor said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 11:49 am
I also agree with the guy on top great work!! u did gud hope u submit more
 
AjTaylor replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 11:50 am
*on bottomv
 
Pappito said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 11:43 am
I agree with the guy on top ^ Great work
 
jayseven said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 11:34 am
I like your poem. In my POV, I think your poem has to do with love. It's telling me that you're in love with someone and their presence drags you into them. Or makes you fall deeper in love with them.
 
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