Tempest Love

January 14, 2012
By Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?"


The connection between the souls
Of lovers
Is different than that of fathers
And brothers
It’s quite like the wind
On a stormy day
A bit like the blistering
Hot sun of May
Our connection reminds me
Of a tidal wave
Crashing against the sandy shore
I am the surfer, riding the wave
Though dangerous, I want so much more.
Your soul is addicting
Terribly beautiful
Your passion
Hot like fire
Lit by the flame of desire
Your energy electric
Your kisses too; everything you say and do
Marvels my heart
By shock, by storm
Nothing ever of the norm
Your sweet brown eyes
Catch me by surprise
Your welcoming smile
Keeps me waiting awhile
Waiting for the day when we can sit
In a forest
Enchanted, sparkling with magical beauty
The beauty of our love
Emanating faster and faster
From our young, zealous hearts
Beating to the sound
Of the loudest call of the sparrow
In the deepest depths of the wood
Dark and scary
Fierce and intense
I find myself in utter bliss
Jordan, I love you
I want you, babe
But, my darling, do you feel the same?
Don’t tell me you love me
Show me you do
To me, my love, there is so much to prove
Wait at my doorstep
Sing me a song
Keep my heart for oh, so long
Make me love you
Without the shadow of a doubt
Don’t ever let my lips
Form into a pout
So on a beach
Or beneath a tree
Love me for all of
Eternity.


The author's comments:
I want to thank Jordan for inspiring me to write this poem. Though we are no longer together, there will always be a special place in my heart for him, and I am not ashamed to share the feelings that I was experiencing in that moment because they were incredible. But let me tell you, love is a tempest storm.

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on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:08 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was amazing, The way you described it was incredible!!!! Keep Writing!!!

on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:40 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I really like it---how interesting that you compared love to a tempest storm. It was refreshing instead of love being a drug. Good job!

on Jan. 30 2012 at 5:00 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 379 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

The imagery is amazing! (: I really, really liked this poem...I think, maybe, saying the word babe kind of doesn't fit in this piece, but other than that I have not critisicm whatsoever! Lovely!

on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:37 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

I love it. there is not a thing I would change. It is amazing. I like how you ended the poem with the word eternity. Its great. :D

Aginger GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 1:52 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?"

Thank you so much, your comments mean a lot to me

Loftus GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:11 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

This was breath taking! I absolutely loved this and there is no criticism I have for this piece because it was well written. Please keep writing. You're amazing at it.

on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:46 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

Wow I absolutely love this. When I first started reading it I thought'd it'd be just another well written love poem but it's way better than that. I love the imagery and the words you use. You're a really good writer. Great job.

EvonkaH BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 2:04 pm
EvonkaH BRONZE, Lakeland, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Amor no es Amor"
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best.

I felt and shared the love that you and this young man once shared. I basically relived it the imagery was so great. Awesome♥EvonkaH♥

Aginger GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 11:43 am
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?"

Thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate it. By the way, your photographs are wonderful.

on Jan. 27 2012 at 10:54 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Oh my gosh this poem is amazing! The imagery is great, and I really like the title of the poem. Please keep writing poetry! You really do have a talent!


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