For You...

January 13, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Calming light emerges,
Intertwined somewhere,
In the shine, the comfort of your eyes?
How peaceful, reassuring...
Just...so...
Beautiful.

Softly,
Lullabies drift...
Could it be?
Are you singing over me?

Falling...falling... I reach for...
The beauty?
The gentleness?
Everything...
Captured in a simple action...
You take my hand; and yet, my heart...

Breathing,
So alive...
What can we say now?
Silent.
Hesitation.
Breathe...breathe...
Perfection.

Freedom...

Laced in your sweet, ivory kiss...
Burning in your careful touch...
At last...
We're no longer hidden.

And we fly...
Away...
Away...
Into what?

...Possibly love? ~


The author's comments:
For someone I care so much about...<3

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on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:28 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

the imagery and feeling in this is just fantastic. i am never dissappointed when i read your work! you are the best!

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:47 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Okay, I changed my mind.. this is my new favorite (: i loooooove how you use colors, like "ivory kiss"! its just AMAZING!

on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:04 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

I like it as well it's beautiful like always

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:34 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Written I like this one :)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:25 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks for you advice! Please read and comment on my other work too!^^

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:22 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

I liked the content a lot, it was amazing :) The only suggestion I have is to be careful with your organization. The way you have it written right now forces the reader to take many pauses, and this can make a great piece seem monotonous. Otherwise, great job! :)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:21 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much!^^

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:07 am
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

I really like your style of writing, I'd love to be able to do this but whenever I try writing in this style it turns out so cheesy sounding >.< 5/5 def though, you have an awesome talent =)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 8:50 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 142 comments
It's haunting, beautiful, amazing. I like how soft it is. I like the meaning of someone thats there. though their invisible. Nice. 5 stars

on Jan. 31 2012 at 5:03 pm
cut-out-ur-eyes SILVER, Mechicsvil, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
See the animal in his cage that you built. Are you sure what side you're on? What if everything around you, Isn't quite as it seems? What if all the world you think you know, Is an elaborate dream? -Nine Inch Nails

very beautiful and orginal :D 5 stars!!!

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:46 am
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
I love the line sweet ivory kiss, it's so unique and creative. Amazing poem! Could you read my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance? Thank you!

raeee GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:17 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

Fantasmical. (: I love it a lot.

on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:57 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks so much!^^

on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:53 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This is beautiful, in a halting, hesitatingly sort of haunting way ;) i love how you set it up, with all the trailing off and how you set the lines....wonderful =) 5/5

on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:24 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

this sounds a lot like a song. You should repost it under song lyrics. I love it. 5/5

on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:12 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Pretty. I like the structure of it! It sounds very hopeful and weelllllll written

on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:22 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

This is a little old actually, but it's about how i feel about him, and thank you!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:20 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Beautiful. Seems like a poem about a new love? If it reflects your endeavors I wish you the best of luck!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:07 pm
PoetryMaster BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
-A bird does not sing because it has an answer; it sings because it has a song.
- We make a living by what we get; we make a life by what we give
- The summit of happiness is reached when a person is ready to be what he is.

soo good :D

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:35 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thanks(: I'm not sure what this was meant to say... But thank you




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