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For You...

Calming light emerges,
Intertwined somewhere,
In the shine, the comfort of your eyes?
How peaceful, reassuring...
Just...so...
Beautiful.

Softly,
Lullabies drift...
Could it be?
Are you singing over me?

Falling...falling... I reach for...
The beauty?
The gentleness?
Everything...
Captured in a simple action...
You take my hand; and yet, my heart...

Breathing,
So alive...
What can we say now?
Silent.
Hesitation.
Breathe...breathe...
Perfection.

Freedom...

Laced in your sweet, ivory kiss...
Burning in your careful touch...
At last...
We're no longer hidden.

And we fly...
Away...
Away...
Into what?

...Possibly love? ~





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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:47 am
Okay, I changed my mind.. this is my new favorite (: i loooooove how you use colors, like "ivory kiss"! its just AMAZING!
 
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:28 am
the imagery and feeling in this is just fantastic. i am never dissappointed when i read your work! you are the best!
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 7:04 pm
I like it as well it's beautiful like always
 
AlaskaGrown said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:34 pm
Written I like this one :)
 
-Kal- said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:22 pm
I liked the content a lot, it was amazing :) The only suggestion I have is to be careful with your organization. The way you have it written right now forces the reader to take many pauses, and this can make a great piece seem monotonous. Otherwise, great job! :)
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:25 pm
Thanks for you advice! Please read and comment on my other work too!^^
 
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 11:07 am
I really like your style of writing, I'd love to be able to do this but whenever I try writing in this style it turns out so cheesy sounding >.< 5/5 def though, you have an awesome talent =)
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 6:21 pm
Thanks so much!^^
 
Wonderment said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 8:50 pm
It's haunting, beautiful, amazing. I like how soft it is. I like the meaning of someone thats there. though their invisible. Nice. 5 stars
 
Cut-out-ur-eyes said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 5:03 pm
very beautiful and orginal :D 5 stars!!!
 
Ella1 said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 11:46 am
I love the line sweet ivory kiss, it's so unique and creative. Amazing poem! Could you read my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance? Thank you!
 
rachie-lou-who said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 4:17 pm
Fantasmical. (: I love it a lot.
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:53 pm
This is beautiful, in a halting, hesitatingly sort of haunting way ;) i love how you set it up, with all the trailing off and how you set the lines....wonderful =) 5/5
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 2:57 pm
Thanks so much!^^
 
chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:24 pm
this sounds a lot like a song. You should repost it under song lyrics. I love it. 5/5
 
SilverSun said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 9:12 pm
Pretty. I like the structure of it! It sounds very hopeful and weelllllll written
 
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:20 pm
Beautiful. Seems like a poem about a new love? If it reflects your endeavors I wish you the best of luck!
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:22 pm
This is a little old actually, but it's about how i feel about him, and thank you!
 
PoetryMajor said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:07 pm
soo good :D
 
Ravenfall1020 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 6:32 pm
wow i like ^w^
 
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