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True Masochism

Lightning Strikes
Raindrops are piercing through my brain
I loved this weather, when we were together
But today it brings nothing but pain

Her arms are around me
Around my neck.
Her hugs are affectionate
Yet dripping with poison.

But I still fall in her arms
Despite my unconscious alarms
I’m entranced by her scent
Quite out of my mind

My eyes are wide open
But clearly shut

She cuts me to pieces
I fall on the floor
My friends do their best to try and restore

But I’m still crawling back...

Begging for more.



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HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:38 am
It's very deep in emotion and love can do that trick our minds but fill our hearts with false joy
 
Blue4indigo said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:40 pm
This is great! The rhyming is pretty good...although it can be a bit distracting... Anyways, its great, and some of the lines are just GOLDEN!
 
Lashonti said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 4:26 pm
Kinda sounds like me & my ex, he constanly broke my heart, fed lies to me, i was oblivious to teh fact that he never loved me but yet I kept falling for his lies and kept going back to him. Your poetry is easy to relate too. I like that =)
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 8:40 pm
Sounds like a very poisonous relationship going on here....
 
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