Glances like Strangers

January 13, 2012
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We used to be best friends
Ride or Die till the end
Deep dark secrets
Shared over a slice of pizza
Now it's just glances in the hallway
As if we were strangers
I'm feeling like a lone ranger
A long stormy day
Without a rainbow
A playa
Without his hoes
Without Nakiya
You hardly talk
You no longer call
So I guess
All thats left
Is a forgotten friendship
And the only thing that
Ties us together
Bonds us together
Is our deep dark secrets
We glance at each other in
The hallways
No hellos
No goodbyes
From others we look like
Complete strangers
To people who don't know better
They'll think
We're just strangers
Glancing at each other
Caught each others eye
But I know better
We used to be best friends

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Ashtyn C. said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 9:26 pm
Not nice to post about me Lola *rolls eyes*
LedZepGurl said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 12:10 am
I love this poem, it reminds me of an old best friend I used to have in elementary but now it's just akward silence nd glances through middle school hallways.
Writer_Jordan said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:31 pm
Very good, sends a clear message. Happened to me and my best friend too.
zadiekatie23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 3:11 pm
I think anyone who reads this can connect, something like this has probably happened to them. A very powerful piece. Thanks! :)
ElvenGirl4Ever said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 2:32 pm
Really good, I thought it was sweet! I relate to it as well. I aslo agree with Aaka131
xoSamanthaxo said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 5:02 pm
I like it and I can relate to it! (: It's very goood the way you describbed it and I like the title!
Silver2black said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 12:34 am
I enjoyed reading it, got very curious, I'm very sorry for the sad story line, I really like the style and the option of the words put in odder it has a look and tone, something seems to be missing something, Honestly 4/5 !
Aaka131 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:17 pm
I like it, this sort of thing happens way too often. This is a perfect description of what its like, to those who have been through it, and for those who haven't.
JustinBieberGirl said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:16 pm
I really enjoyed your poem, I think what makes it soooo good is that most people can relate to this.
White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:09 pm
i really like all of your work!
Skieler said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 10:24 am
i really liked it
scenesoccerqueen said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 8:16 pm
very well written i can feel the emotion as i read it...nothing better than 'moving' your reader.
Choosing2Live4Christ said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 2:32 pm
it's really good :) the best friend bit reminds me of my poem "Best Friends Forever"
SilverSun said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 6:13 pm
I think it was a nice bit of work that contained a whole lot of time and thought. i thought it was pretty!
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 4:25 pm
I really liked the beginning with all the comparisons! Nice job!
CaliGIRL282 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 4:07 pm
I get exactly how it feels to have that happen. I love this Poem i hope you keep writing.
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