Cleansing

January 14, 2012
By Amrun BRONZE, Al Sa&#39adah, Other
Amrun BRONZE, Al Sa&#39adah, Other
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Not many know how crying heals.

The tears falling are like rain on a spring day.

After they have passed, everything is fresh and clean.

And the wounds are healed in your heart.

Not many people know this

But still the tears heal them.

And like the rain, leaves them feeling refreshed and clean.

This is the healing power of tears.


The author's comments:
This is just something I wrote one day after I had a little crying session. This is my first real poem so I'd really appreciate some feedback, positive and negative but please be nice:)

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Amrun BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 12:25 am
Amrun BRONZE, Al Sa&#39adah, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Thanks for your nice comment, I really appreciate it, especially since I'm a fan of your's:)  I've just submitted two more poems so once they get approved it'd be great if you could check them out.

on Feb. 29 2012 at 8:57 am
I like it. It's well written. I'd love to read more of your work so please post more.


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