Blue Hope

January 15, 2012
By Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Blue
So versatile
It is icy death
Or the beautiful sky
Blue is the color that fills my dreams
And all spectrums of life
But most of all
In any sense
Blue is inspiration
It fills you with hope
And hope is omnipotent
The color blue is like life
Sometimes it makes you happy
And other times it makes you sad
Blue is music
And blue is art
Blue is amazing
It is the last glimpse of the day
And the first of the morning
The color blue flows through me.



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Dmokk SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:44 am
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Hey everyone that reads this, please rate and comment my work, dont just read it and move on, i wanna know what all of you think wether it is constructive or negative, otherwise i will never learn

Jalkan said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 10:01 am
Yes, I did. 5 stars on all.

Dmokk SILVER said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 4:59 am
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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did you also rate them?

Jalkan said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 7:50 pm
Excellent poem. I've read your other articles and they're all very good as well. Keep up the good work!

Dmokk SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 3:49 pm
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
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Thanks soooo much!!

Dmokk SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 3:49 pm
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments
it's kind of too late to change but next time i write a poem i will keep you'r comments in mind

on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:47 pm
PoetryMaster BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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Favorite Quote:
-A bird does not sing because it has an answer; it sings because it has a song.
- We make a living by what we get; we make a life by what we give
- The summit of happiness is reached when a person is ready to be what he is.

This is really really good! i love how you make blue more than just a colour :)

Dmokk SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:19 pm
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Thanks! could you read my other articles too

on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:11 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
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This is a great poem!! I love how you incorporated the color blue into all aspects of life. One thing i would do different is describe sad and describe happy. What makes you sad and happy ? and also you feelings, senses etc to describe the color blue :)

Dmokk SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:45 am
Dmokk SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Hey everybody! please comment and rate, also be constructive please!! if you like this go check out my other two articles Angelic and Gray in Charleston!


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