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Love is written on the palm
of the hand that he last held.
Blinded by love you see only
what your heart reveals to you.
Your scarred heart is in anguish
but still you refuse
to let yourself see the truth.
You try to hide your pain
but your tears are all too evident.
He is gone now,
but still your love for him remains.





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i.hope.you.dance said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 11:07 pm
it's so like, rich- the words feel very pretty ^^ good work
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 8:40 am
thanks :D ...
 
Aginger said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 7:05 pm
This is very well written and I can really relate to it because I am experiencing all those emotions at the moment. For someone who is going through that exact situation, I think you did an amazing job portraying what it feels like. Nice job!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:22 am
Omg. Thank you. I love it when my readers can relate. :D
 
JD6671 said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 1:18 pm
Hey, ya commented on my song Go Away. I checked this peom out, and though it was great! Just, it's a little dark. I kinda think your probably better at writing songs, and poems than me. I like the same authors you do too! :D See, I write songs, raps ( or did, I quit because I thought I wasn't good- my first song, Missing, is a rap ), storys, and the occasional time, I start a movie. But anyways, 5 stars! It's great and keep writing!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 2:21 pm
Yes I did comment on your song and it was amazing. Yes I'm more into the dark genre. No im not better than you. You are amazing. I think it's great that we have the same favorite authors. Do you like Edgar Allan Poe?
 
XCBVIA replied...
Sept. 13, 2013 at 9:07 pm
I'm back as XCBVIA!!!!! cross crountry buckeye valley is awesome!!!! LOL get it, x is cross, it's like our logo. I din't understand when i first saw it. Anyways, i'm BACK!!! and really like your work. I left like tons of other comments (hope you don't die of boredom reading them ;) ) so and i'ma put on some new stuff but it will b... (more »)
 
Ella1 said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 11:42 am
I love it! It's an interesting take on love. Congratulations on winning the contest, it's clear why :) 5 stars!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:10 am
Aww thanks. You're sweet. Can't wait to look at your articles/art. :D
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:05 pm
Love this!! You are wonderful girl! Ill say it over and over! You deserved to win too! 5/5
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:11 am
Thanks written! you always have such nice things to say. But you are way better than me, girl!
 
electra_wolf said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 8:35 am
Hey. Great poem. ily bestie.
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:25 pm
Heyyyy. thanx. Ily too lex.
 
Shmelmo said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 7:01 pm
Very cool - Kinda sad. Congrats on the contest :) Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 11:49 am
sure! :D THANK YOU BTW.
 
Muzee3 said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 1:54 am
Congratulations. This is very true! Keep it up!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 8:33 am
thanks. I wrote this in a rush for a class poetry contest. lol.
 
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