Chains

January 17, 2012
By AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
25 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.


The girl who sits all alone, everyone knows her
But at the same time they don't, of what is or were
The past is dead, her word, silent, voicing the cure

Message within message, the answer within lines

Will you, the seeker take the time to figure out
Why she is silent, yet she still cries, what is about
The pain that swallows her can a love amount

Can you feel the pain as words slowly inclines?

An unmistakeable love that pushed her in the corner
Seeing what games can push her to the border
When games are gone, will he not forlorn her?

Something she holds dear, but cannot touch, black tines

Seeing she cant, feeling if not, down by the chain
Chaining her down by confusion spilling tears of pain
Thought to be an empty case as love will drain

But messing with Cupid's game, even more combines

Bruises of hate seething her body appears in mind
But getting up he never thought he would be behind
Breaking chains, getting up, she sees all and no longer blind


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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 7:24 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

I really love this poem. I can completely relate to it. Sometimes I am the girl with the chains and sometimes I am the one trying to figure out someone else - it all depends what I am going through. Thank you for posting this, it is really good.

on Feb. 3 2012 at 12:19 pm
PAZS12 PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Be you, Be true!

I know exactly what you mean, I have been here, I have friends who have been and are in this position. In your first two lines, it reminds me that people are so quick to judge from the outside and not the inside.

on Feb. 1 2012 at 7:51 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
25 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

yes i don't mind:) i think it's lovely that you wish to do that I am honored:)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:25 pm
kaylala_22 PLATINUM, Hillsboro, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"A beautiful personality shines brighter than any pretty face"

You have your way with words. That was like magic. Wow. I loved it. You're amazing! I put poetry and quotes all over my bedroom wall, and I wanna ask for ur permission to print this out and put it on my wall? Don't worry, I'll make sure ur name is on it so u get all the credit :)

Regan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:42 pm
Regan PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
22 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's no such thing as impossible for the word itself says im possible.

:O thts how amazing it is! i can really feel the emotion! sad but amazing! u have quite the touch in writing!:)

on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:16 pm
Zaid1315 SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter where life takes me find me with a smile" -Mac Miller

All I can say is....wow! AMAZING! I enjoyed reading every line of it!

on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:08 pm
Kaity890 SILVER, Garden City, Kansas
6 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
And At The Touch Of Love Everyone Becomes A Poet

Very good completely relatable the girl who sits alone really makes you think about a few things


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