To love or Not to Love

Not to love you
is my passion.
To love you
is my curse.
Either way
it doesn't matter
as long as
you're happy.
If i love you not
I would cry for ages
Leaving my broken heart
to writhe in pain
until the end of time.
If i love you
my heart will remain
stuck in overdrive
until I run out of gas
and find myself
spitting and sputtering
on the edge of a desolate road.
So, question being,
to love or not to love?





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StarlitSunrise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 12:37 pm
This is really good! I like the imagery you used, and I thought that the ending was especially powerful. :) I love the idea of a heart 'running out of gas'. Great work!
 
SteelersJdog said...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 9:51 am
I love the concept here! It's really original, nice job!
 
TheWeirdPoet said...
May 14, 2012 at 10:10 pm
Ah, I am jealous. I've wanted to write a poem like this for so long, but never had the creative juices for it, like how you obviously do. Perfectly written. I do not see how this could get any better. Love to hate, but hate to love. It is all bittersweet, and I love it. Bravo
 
Josika.Nav said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:42 am
wow! beautiful poem. the short cut sentences enhance the poem's fluidity. i love it! great work and keep writing XD !!
 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 12:33 pm
I love the beginning. This poem flows so well and is just beautiful!!!
 
AgentOrange789 said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 1:00 am

Well done! I love your direct but eloquent style. Reminds me of...well, just listening to someone talk. 

BTW I just got another few poems uploaded...would you mind checking out one of them, preferably the one called "Snap"? I would greatly appreciate it. 

 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:49 am
I love this! Amazing job! That is a good question..And yes, why don't you get it published in a magazine??:)
 
applesauceHater said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 6:37 pm
SO far , i really like this one. It was fun to read. to love or not to love? Now that is the question:)
 
Sharkgirl said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 5:16 pm
Buetiful poem (sorry i can't spell)
 
fluterocker015 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 9:43 am
I love this one (: it's really good!
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 7:04 am
once again thank you so much for the feedback! I love getting on here and realizing that poeple actually like what i write!
 
Love_In_Her_Eyes said...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 10:43 pm
What?? This isn't in a magazine? Such a beautiful poem. I love it!
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 7:38 am
thanks! it means a lot to me to hear some positive feedback. :D
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 8:56 am
loveissmiles I dont think anyone could resist to read and comment on your work! You are just such an amazing writer!!:)
 
loveissmiles replied...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 7:50 am
Thank ya Tamara. Feel free to comment and Rate away, i will be back on later in 3rd & 4th hour but im headed to pe now so I gots to go. :(
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 9:23 am
Thats completely ok. And your welcome Winter;) And I sure will!
 
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