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.Lies.
January 16, 2012
It happened
but never did
you knew
but never mentioned
the opposite
was but told
we thought
that everything
for possible
to be the truth
but the truth
is that you
Lied !
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This article has 18 comments.
denifelice SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:53 pm
First, I like that it's short and gets the message to the reader without having to be all cliche and stuff. Second, I love how you put a degree of mystery in this piece, it's very interesting. Also, I like how vague it is so that anyone can relate. Good work!
Simplyjessey BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 9:48 am
nice work :)
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:31 am
haha this is pretty dope
butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 5:53 am
hey! this is very good and very relatable. keep it up!
mariissa said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 11:16 am
Well said.. I really do get where your coming from :/
xJessex666 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:02 am
This poem is a bit simple You could've ended it better than Lies!
Kimberlywrites BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 1:50 pm
It's a really unique poem. Very interesting way of describing a lie.
AutumnInside BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:14 am
I feel like this is really heart felt with a story behind it. It's very good. I like it's length.
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:13 am
Well spoke, but honestly not to be crass or anything is this about a physical thing that happened?
iamawesomeK SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 6:11 am
i think it's a nice short poem
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 5:18 am
This is a nice poem:). i like the message of the poem.
