.Lies.

January 16, 2012
By Anonymous

It happened
but never did
you knew
but never mentioned
the opposite
was but told
we thought
that everything
for possible
to be the truth
but the truth
is that you
Lied !

The author's comments:
The way lies appear to be the truth "It happened but never did"

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on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:53 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis

First, I like that it's short and gets the message to the reader without having to be all cliche and stuff. Second, I love how you put a degree of mystery in this piece, it's very interesting. Also, I like how vague it is so that anyone can relate. Good work!

on Jan. 22 2012 at 9:48 am
Simplyjessey BRONZE, Dillonvale, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is taken.

nice work :)

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:10 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

Very nice! I liked that it was short, but it told a lot. Great job!

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:31 am
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

haha this is pretty dope

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 5:53 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! this is very good and very relatable. keep it up!

-Char- GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 1:08 am
-Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
The true friends are the ones who can get you to laugh even in your darkest depressions. ~Me

Very good :)

mariissa said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 11:16 am
mariissa, Sdfsa, Nebraska
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Well said.. I really do get where your coming from :/

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:43 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Yes, this is an very old poem, but thanks for the honest review !

on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:02 am
xJessex666 GOLD, Blossvale, New York
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say that love is forever, then your forever is all that I need"

This poem is a bit simple You could've ended it better than Lies!

on Jan. 19 2012 at 1:50 pm
Kimberlywrites BRONZE, Waikoloa, Hawaii
2 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we have not been given a spirit of fear but of power and of love and of a sound mind.

II Timothy 1:7

It's a really unique poem. Very interesting way of describing a lie.

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 9:13 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

too much feelings, i think they are a bit messy and not understood well in your mind. i like it , it seems honest

GHALC BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:24 am
GHALC BRONZE, Adasdasd, Kansas
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Seems like theres real emotion in it, I like it. I also like how short it is, and you still got the message across. :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:16 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

No, it's just anything i wrote down.

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:08 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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it's quite nice ... reallly liked it .

on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:14 am
AutumnInside BRONZE, Newfane, New York
3 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best laid schemes of mice and men, often go askew."

I feel like this is really heart felt with a story behind it. It's very good. I like it's length.

on Jan. 19 2012 at 7:13 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Well spoke, but honestly not to be crass or anything is this about a physical thing that happened?

on Jan. 19 2012 at 6:11 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

i think it's a nice short poem

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 5:18 am
This is a nice poem:). i like the message of the poem.


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