Shining so bright

January 10, 2012
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Your eyes so pretty like the oceans tide
Your hair is the first glimmer of a beautiful sunrise.
I know I love you because the feeling inside
And you never leave my mind.
A fire burns bright it's my love for you
Going away is a breeze that dims the sweet light.
The light is still there and warms me through
The cold heartless nights.
When I see you again my heart comes alight
And the joy in my life is again sparked.
And my love for you shines forever bright

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Ali101 said...
Oct. 8, 2014 at 10:02 pm
that's really sweet. You'll make it big going like that! Great job
Ruthie_j said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 8:34 pm
Really Pretty :D
SarahJean2014 said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 10:48 pm
Really good:)
Mary-Bo-Peep said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 10:18 pm
So sweet..:)
country-cutie said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 4:45 pm
i lov it!!!!! its really sweet :)
CaliGirl20 said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 8:09 pm
i absolutely love the poem its sweet :D great job
Wildflower30 said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 11:17 pm
Sweet imagery. :)
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