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Shining so bright

January 10, 2012
By Tanis,the,apple SILVER, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
Tanis,the,apple SILVER, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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"The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at anytime."
-Mark Twain


Your eyes so pretty like the oceans tide
Your hair is the first glimmer of a beautiful sunrise.
I know I love you because the feeling inside
And you never leave my mind.
A fire burns bright it's my love for you
Going away is a breeze that dims the sweet light.
The light is still there and warms me through
The cold heartless nights.
When I see you again my heart comes alight
And the joy in my life is again sparked.
And my love for you shines forever bright

The author's comments:
I wrote this for my girlfriend and I hope all you who reads this had someone like this in there life too

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Reese18 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2014 at 10:02 pm
Reese18 SILVER, Redford, Michigan
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that's totally awesome

that's really sweet. You'll make it big going like that! Great job

on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:34 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
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The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Really Pretty :D

on Jan. 26 2012 at 10:48 pm
Sarah.Ellis2014 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Life can't ever really defeat a writer who is in love with writing, for life itself is a writer's lover until death - fascinating, cruel, lavish, warm, cold, treacherous, constant. ~Edna Ferber

It is impossible to discourage the real writers - they don't give a damn what you say, they're going to write. ~Sinclair Lewis

Really good:)

Mary-Bo-Peep said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 10:18 pm
So sweet..:)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 4:45 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

i lov it!!!!! its really sweet :)

on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:09 pm
live.love.learn. SILVER, El Cajon, California
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Favorite Quote:
The supreme prayer of my heart is not to be learned, rich, famous, powerful, or good, but simply to be radiant. I desire to radiate health, cheerfulness, calm courage, and good will. I wish to live without hate, whim, jealousy, envy, fear. I wish to be simple, honest, frank, natural, clean in mind and clean in body, unaffected - as ready to say I do not know, if it be so, and to meet all men on an absolute equality - to face any obstacle and meet every difficulty unabashed and unafraid.
I wish others to live their lives, too - up to their highest, fullest, and best. To that end I pray that I may never meddle, interfere, dictate, give advice that is not wanted, or assist when my services are not needed. If I can help people, I'll do it by giving them a chance to help themselves; and if I can uplift or inspire, let it be by example, inference, and suggestion, rather than by injunction and dictation. That is to say, I desire to be radiant - to radiate life.
-Elbert Hubbard

i absolutely love the poem its sweet :D great job

on Jan. 16 2012 at 11:17 pm
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
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Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Sweet imagery. :)