January 10, 2012
By lezziefarie GOLD, Palestine, Texas
lezziefarie GOLD, Palestine, Texas
13 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you get away with a mistake and other times life forces you to watch the one you love, love some one else......

With love comes pain.
And with pain, somehow comes the hope for better days.

Maybe not as useless.
Maybe its not a waste of time like I always thought...

After all without love there would be no hope.

And withouthope there would be no tomorrow.

The author's comments:
love can be painful but it teaches us that not every thing is as it seems...

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on Apr. 2 2012 at 9:53 am
katieRainbows BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
I was going to take over the world, but I got distracted by something sparkly.

Pix this is so awesome. is there a deeper meaning to this? <3

on Jan. 16 2012 at 5:18 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I like the concept! If I were you, I'd break the lines down a little more and add some commas in. Overall, good job!


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