January 11, 2012
By Ahtyo BRONZE, Orange, California
Ahtyo BRONZE, Orange, California
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Favorite Quote:
Build a man a fire hes warm for a day. Set a man on fire hes warm for the rest of his life.

When you think about them
they're such a simple thing.
Could be just a loop,
a pull,
and a twirl.

It could be insignificant
or it could rock a world.

Can tell a story
No one wanted to tell.
Of a broken childhood
or a life gone to hell.
About a kid stolen from his mother,
left with out his brother,
Or the loss of a significant other.
To the one to beaten down to scream, to shout
It can feel like its their only way out.
It can come as a message to
when they tie there shoes.
What REALLY in life do you have left to lose?
It can affect the ones
who are a slave to the needle
and that drown in booze.
Just remember,
things dont always have one meaning,
interesting to know when hope is fleeing.
One can simply pass it over and give it no heed.
To some it means none.
But to us it means lots.

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 1:41 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."

~Luara Moncur

AWESOME use of metaphors! i do think though that the rhyme took away from what you really wanted to write but either way very NICE!


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