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January 3, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Stolen away,
Beating... Beating...
Taking a breath,
Denial weeps for us.
Against my skin...
Hidden inside,
Are we really nothing?

Softly this heart longs...
For you...
What lies in your eyes?
Oh, my love...
Remember who I am,
So gently falling...
Captured.

Whisper again,
Are all your secrets screaming?
Begging...
Turn around,
Face the fear of Passion!
Silent...

Is it love that you're thinking of when we are quiet?
Falling...
Silent...
Again.

© Ben Q., Marblehead, MA

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n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:28 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

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This is good...so many people probably feel this way and can relate...great job at displaying it!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:35 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Thank you(: it's a sad thing to cope with, but writing helps me.
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:26 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

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I've never seen anything from this perspective before really. Never occurred to me that people love people who don't love them. Well Written, you captured the emotion well
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 5:00 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Thank you(:
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 2:54 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
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“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

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HEy i marked this one as my fav. I think that should say how i feel about it.... JK I would critisize but i don't see anything wrong with this one or any of your other ones.