I have become free

January 11, 2012
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I have Become free
I no longer am trapped in a cage wasting my life
I have Become free
I thought I was alone
But I wasn't the walls of the cage
Made me feel so unreal
Then I sooned Revealed
That no longer do i feel so sealed
I'm here just me
And i have become free

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biz1o1 said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 12:45 pm
Very well written, but it's a little simple. Proofread your work before entering it because bad grammer mistakes makes it unattractive, but this is certainly attractive. Other than that- I LOVE IT! 3 stars!
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 11:25 am
Simple, but good!
jazz. replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 9:15 pm
thank you!!
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