I have become free

January 11, 2012
By jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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I have Become free
I no longer am trapped in a cage wasting my life
I have Become free
I thought I was alone
But I wasn't the walls of the cage
Made me feel so unreal
Then I sooned Revealed
That no longer do i feel so sealed
I'm here just me
And i have become free


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on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:45 pm
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

Very well written, but it's a little simple. Proofread your work before entering it because bad grammer mistakes makes it unattractive, but this is certainly attractive. Other than that- I LOVE IT! 3 stars!

jazz. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:15 pm
jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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thank you!!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 11:25 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Simple, but good!


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