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Why am I here

January 11, 2012
By jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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jazz. BRONZE, Southaven, Mississippi
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How did I get here
Why am I here
I use to be so tall
Now i feel really small
I lost my will
I've lost my way
MY legs are standing still
Deciding they want to stay
But mind wants to runaway
So why am i still here

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Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:42 pm
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

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Very good, but it's a little plain. You should try some bigger words, and look for capitalization and punctuation mistakes- proofread your work before sending it in. Other than that- GREAT WORK! 3 stars!