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It's hear
Almost near
But for some reason i shead a tear
I am spinning and spinning
I go round and round
Suddenly I am upside down
I've lost my will
I've lost my way
I do not wish to stay
White Walls
White clothes
White everywhere
On one wall I hear
Deck the halls and happiness
The other wall i hear sadness
Disrecpt Abuse
That wall opens and I see a Family
Not just any family but a lost Family
The other wall opens and I see my Family a happy joyful and Beautiful family
Suddenly my tears are away
Now I am gratefull everyday
Never will I go away
Because i do not want to loose my Way





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jazz. said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 1:24 pm
thank you ill fix that right away
 
biz1o1 said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 12:38 pm
Very good but instead of using "i" use "I." That's a bad grammer habit to get in to, and that's fine. A lot of people do that, and a few of the sentence did not relate to the flow of the piece, other than that- it was AWESOME... 4 stars!
 
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