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Locked in a box.
With no one around,
And I can’t hear a sound.

Locked in a box.
With no way out,
And I was starting to freak out.

Locked in a box.
Panicking within,
Feeling the room start to spin.

Locked in a box,
With the walls closing in,
Knowing my inescapable fate was starting to begin.

Locked in a box.
With my head feeling faint,
And my pride feeling taint.

Locked in a box.
Giving up in disgrace,
With no chance to escape.
What I now call,
The deep abyss of your mind.




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xXstephanXx said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 1:28 pm:
I though it was great. You should stop trying to look at my screen while im writing this. Anyway, it is amazing! i loved how all the stanzas ended with somethig similar to the last.... read mine.
 
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xxthemorriganxx said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 8:27 am:
Wow, I really love this poem, it's very good. :)
 
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holly.nicole said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 3:27 pm:
woooow, amazing :]
 
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illusions said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 2:40 pm:
i love the ending! plz check me out and commment plz!
 
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