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My Sun That Never Shined.

January 7, 2012
By hail911 BRONZE, Roseville, California
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Everyone has those sunny days,
when the clouds that soak their heads go away,
but today and for the longest time,
i personally have not,
seen my sun shine,
so u may ask why, has your sun gone away,
i just might reply with,
it is my own self that has blocked the warming light from my skin,
because i love u so,
and i know that, i will never have you,
so when will i have,
one of those sunny days again?

© Danielle L., League City, TX

The author's comments:
What inspired me? I fell for this guy, but i don't have any confidence when talking to guys. So i wrote about my level of confidence a.k.a the sun, and the clouds which symbolize my covers and fears of what might happen. What am i scared of? answer, myself.
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