Breaking Out.. All for You

January 10, 2012
By Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

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Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3


When I whispered to you
And stood up for myself
You just stood there
and took it
No hazy blue eyes
No pleads of regrets
Just a blank look
from you...
No blushing pale skin
No sad sighs
God...
Was I that blind?
Was I naive?
I cared for you....
Oh so dearly....
And of course
what comes back
it betrayal...
And I guess they say
Love only works both ways
while heart break only goes one
My breaths of relief
sighed one...
by...
one....
All the kisses
All the hugs
were blank nothingness
I guess...
And all those nights
I cried for you
filling that endless well
with liquid diamonds...
And that vow to stop
the scars from appearing
and filling the water
with droplettes of blood...
To be happy again....
Were all wasted away
in my mind...
All for you!!!
All for you....
And if you ever
crawl back to me
begging to have me
I guess I will sigh
and look you in the eye
and then give my sincere reply...
"No, Love...
You only bring me harm
and distress
sorrow
and joy...
And I may bring you back
under my wings
But for now
I still love
but it shan't be you
right now
Good Bye
Good Bye
I shall now fly
away from here
away from you
Go find a girl
who will take you for you
and you take her for her
and maybe then
I shall take you back"


The author's comments:
I wrote this for a guy i really liked... :D I had just broken up with him.. but I still adore him... If he is reading this... Thanks for your time!

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Saika PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:22 am
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3

all righty! i will!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 11:36 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

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You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Awesome :) I really like the way you put this into words. Could you check out my poem, Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?

Saika PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:44 am
Saika PLATINUM, Durango, Colorado
21 articles 48 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love and Tolerate every person, pony, and brony <3

thanks guys!!!!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:39 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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I like it really, mentioning wings and looking at the wings in the picture, I love it !

on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:39 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Beautiful. Your imagery, and detail is truely inspiring.. I could study this poem and never be able to write so vividly.. 5 stars.




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