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Your Love has Ruined My Life

By , boise, ID
To me you are nothing
To you I am a toy
To everyone else your love has Ruined everything
Everything I know is now gone
Everything I love is now with that princess of evil
To me you everything
To you I am nothing
I wish I had someone else
I wish I wouldn't see you everytime I close my eyes
To me you are a fantasy
To you I am just a mistake
A mistake you have said
I say that I must agree with you there
I am a mistake in many ways to different people to you in particular
Your love has ruined me
Your love will haunt me
You have love that you give out
Then take it back so meanly
I am fragile
I am carefull
I thought that you would be okay for me
Your love has ruined my life





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scenesoccerqueen said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 4:25 pm
This is written so well! the wording, the breaks and all really emphasized it good!
 
Snowi replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 5:43 pm
haha really i don't think i just do. and when you just do, you are who you truely are. i'm writing a new poem with those lines in it, if you want to read it just let me know some how??
 
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