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January 9, 2012
By AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"


Since the beginning I’ve been proved to fail
My “friend” doesn’t understand
My real friend left
Since she left my life has been upside down
Should have seen it coming
Should have known she’d do that
Since we moved I’ve been cut off from the outside world
Gave up having with friends
Gave up being a normal teen
Since is no more. I want all I’ve lost back
The family life I had
The friends that all moved
Since there is nothing left to loose I have no worry
No friends
No sister
No freedom
No family
No No No No No



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deleted said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 10:41 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Really intense. Good work :) relatable and powerful.

on Apr. 2 2012 at 10:48 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thank you :D

on Apr. 2 2012 at 10:47 am
Gabriel.lord.of.shadows PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments
i can relate. awesome work!

on Feb. 23 2012 at 2:30 pm
apcolfer BRONZE, Mexico City, Other
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When people hurt you over and over, think of them like sand paper. They may scratch and hurt you a bit, but in the end, you end up polished and they end up useless.”
― Chris Colfer

Oh my God! You are so good at this! Your poem is really sad, but flowing and pretty at the same time, which makes it very interesting. Can't wait to read more work from you!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 5:36 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

This is very relatable. I know that there are times when I feel all alone. The beginning of my freshman year all my friends turned on me and it sucked - so I can relate. Nicely done! :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:26 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
it's so saad but good! i would've put it a happy ending but it's your poem and i like what you did with it :)

on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:47 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

WOW u r good at poetry!!!!! I love how u make it look easy. have u written anything else besides?

on Feb. 3 2012 at 1:22 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thanks lj I noticed the typo in the title after I submitted it.

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:27 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
I don't think this should be classified as free verse, because I think it would be much better suited for a song! You made great use of patterns here, and went with a very relatable subject. My only complaint is that there is a typo in the story's title.

BrianaK BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:22 pm
BrianaK BRONZE, Waterford, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Keep Believing"

good story! I really like it!

on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:52 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thank you wonder :)

on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:46 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 142 comments
aww. This is good. It's truthful and very relatable

on Jan. 21 2012 at 9:23 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thank you miss. :)

on Jan. 21 2012 at 6:50 pm
missloveliee SILVER, Vienna, Virginia
9 articles 2 photos 21 comments
Love it! :)

on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:51 pm
ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
17 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Babe, do what you have to do." -- Ryan M.
"I like nonsense; it wakes up the brain cells." -- Dr. Seuss
"Put him in the taffy puller!"
"Taffy puller?!"
"Hey! That was my idea!" -- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

so sad :( I know the feeling

on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:49 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thanks for the comment :)

G. said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 5:50 pm
really good!

G. said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 5:49 pm
I really like this poem. :)

on Jan. 12 2012 at 11:20 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

didn't mean to post twice. I hate slow connection.

on Jan. 12 2012 at 11:20 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I was suppose to say hanging with friends not having. Strange how it wasn't on the spell check...


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