Confusion in Love

January 6, 2012
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder


My heart beats faster
And eyes grow wide
As you hold me close
Standing side by side
So wrong but so right,
A confusing finesse
My head warns me no
But my heart screams out yes


The author's comments:
About me and a guy I like who likes me too, but because we've... basically dated each other's best friends before, it wouldn't be right to be together. *sad face* =(

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Luna557 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:01 pm
Luna557 SILVER, Wheaton, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
for springtime is lovetime and viva sweet love -e.e.cummings

Clever, on point, and not overdone. I think some poems are meant to be epics (ie The Illiad) and some are to be savored like small candies.

on Jan. 16 2012 at 12:48 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Sewer sweet but sad

on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:27 pm
AceOfAngels BRONZE, Milford, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Truth is rarely pure and never simple~Oscar Wilde

This is a short and to-the-point poem. I like it simply because it gets the point across without it being overly fruity. I know what it's like to want something but you're not allowed to have it. I hope all the best for you and maybe things will work out. I like the "A confusing finesse" part. It's a small descriptive writing. People overly describe sometimes, but you put it just right, even if it is short and sweet.


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