Confusion in Love

My heart beats faster
And eyes grow wide
As you hold me close
Standing side by side
So wrong but so right,
A confusing finesse
My head warns me no
But my heart screams out yes





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Luna557 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 11:01 pm
Clever, on point, and not overdone. I think some poems are meant to be epics (ie The Illiad) and some are to be savored like small candies.
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 12:48 pm
Sewer sweet but sad
 
AceOfAngels said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 8:27 pm
This is a short and to-the-point poem. I like it simply because it gets the point across without it being overly fruity. I know what it's like to want something but you're not allowed to have it. I hope all the best for you and maybe things will work out. I like the "A confusing finesse" part. It's a small descriptive writing. People overly describe sometimes, but you put it just right, even if it is short and sweet.
 
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