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You, You, You, You, You

January 5, 2012
By AmandaLynn BRONZE, Parrish, Florida
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AmandaLynn BRONZE, Parrish, Florida
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I was here
I lived
I loved
-Beyonce

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My life was perfect
You made it imperfect

I had pain
because you made me ashamed

You lead me into the cave
and left me in a daze

You closed the door
in my face

You made me leave the light
feeling insane

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
It just came to me one day when I was at home sick. I don't know how and I don't know why.
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AngelsKiss PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:13 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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This is a different piece, but intriguing I must say, It seems to speak of a distinct lover, but instead of causing bliss only pain and confusion. Please read and comment on some of mine:)